Wednesday, May 28, 2008

Them Sireens

Okay, here's something I've been working on that's rarin' for a critique. Have at it...

video

12 comments:

Ken Chandler said...

A classic scene from a classic movie. Your interpretation is hilarious.

That old lady with too many cats. . . said...

Can you draw and post a "horny toad?"

S.T. Lewis said...

Very nice, man... I like the screams. Fine choice of audio clip. I already told you what I thought, then you wrote something on paper, and then I got nervous because I was afraid it was about me.

Anonymous said...

I feel like the second man's arm movements are too wide and quick, it makes him look like a cartoon while the first man looks less like a acrtoon and more realistic. not that the cartoony is bad, but I feel like they should be evened out.
Stephanie

Jacob Hunter Black said...

I love the movement when he says, "Horny toad". Very nicely done.

sunnytosh said...

Xac absolutely loved it and kept taking the mouse from me to press play again. I can't wait to show Jim because we love that show.

tinylittlesandra said...

Excellent stuff - I laughed and laughed :O)

BrandonBeckstead said...

Hey Seth this is a really fun clip! I like the screaming part, really great. I think it would help if they were in some type of realistic situation. It would just bridge the gap of believability a bit if they are doing something we can relate to instead of just standing in a blank room. Especially cause the audio is pretty specific. I feel like I want to see pete and what all the hubub is about with him. And the guy not doing the screaming isn't really doing anything. If he has a purpose other than jus to deliver the other line of dialogue this could be stronger. All the motion is really nice! But if we know more about what is going on in their heads this could be fantastic. I think you need to show us why he is screaming, and what his goal is in this scene. It feels a bit like these guys need a purpose, right now they are just kindof delivering a line. But the motion is beautiful and their emotions are quite clear. REally nice piece.

Jamal O said...

wow,

Great blog man.

Interesting drawings, and quality animation to boot.

shall return

jennifer said...

Man, you are so good. The animation is spot on as far as I'm concerned. And you post just about as often as I do.

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Andy said...

I loved the arm swing with the shirt grab. Perfectly reacted.